More done on issue #3. Solved the problem of needing to cut away from the conversation, as it had reached a stopping point, but still having time to tell about Julia's big-bada-boom thingie *and* get them in the Sanctuary and discussing the mission with Jason, by having the big-bada-boom part as a flashback. It reads well, IMO, and I've just sent it to Mouse for her opinion. And I'm now at a stopping point there (goofing off in woods, Tessa gets call, flashback, back in present day she ties loose ends of flashback as they approach the Sanctuary). So I am going to rest my brain.
Note to self: Just because I put food on the desk does not mean I will remember to eat it when I'm in Writing Mode. Always eat a full meal before entering Writing Mode. Thank you, drive through.
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Note to self: Just because I put food on the desk does not mean I will remember to eat it when I'm in Writing Mode. Always eat a full meal before entering Writing Mode. Thank you, drive through.
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